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    Poem... Dream of Dreams

    I hope that this is a good place to share poetry... seems appropriate.

    The following is in my book, Whispers, Shadows & Dreams, and is a fantasy poem. My first epic, almost entirely set to rhyme.

    Dream of Dreams
    (The Rhyme of Faer’lan)

    Moving quickly, as a summer storm
    Dreams happen upon me this way
    Majestic creations of color and form
    Vying for attention, like children at play

    And when I lay me down to sleep,
    I dream of dreams from memories
    Of faerie tales and beautiful girls,
    and medieval fantasies

    And just last night, I had such a dream
    That blew my mind, from the imagery
    An epic tale to traverse all time
    Of a magic Kingdom, told through rhyme

    I’ll recall it now, ‘fore it slips away
    So sit back... relax... and enjoy, okay?

    ~~~~~~~~

    Deep into history, and deeper into past
    A kingdom was built on an Island to last
    A fortress of gold surrounded the land
    Forged by Dwarves with kiln-worn hands

    They were the expert builders of legend and lore
    An ancient race from distant shores
    They came hired to construct the perfect shield
    It encompassed the Island and the Kingdom was sealed

    The Good King deemed that the people must choose
    For the realm needed naming, and he hadn’t a clue
    The people selected, giving the Good King a smile
    ‘Faer’lan’ ‘twas named, in ancient tongue: ‘Emerald Isle’

    So Faer’lan ‘twould be, and the Good King decreed
    The Kingdom be titled, and forever shall it be
    The people rejoiced in a festive celebration
    For their Kingdom was born, they’d created a nation

    But Lord Zsaeth was not pleased, he deemed Faer’lan a disease
    A threat to his neighboring Island state
    And he gazed out his window as he got down on his knees
    Praying to Čhuhl, the Dark Demon of Hate

    A swirling tunnel of red appeared close to his bed
    A horror stepped from the portal holding chains
    “Know that he who prays to me doth tempt end of days,
    to be forever shackled in torturous pains!”

    Lord Zsaeth lowered his head, and with cracked voice said,
    “My Lord Čhuhl doth honor my call.
    I’ll waste not your time, but I have wish for a crime
    that I know will benefit us each and all.”

    Lord Čhuhl smiled in his own unique style
    Then walked before Zsaeth and said
    “Rise and tell me this... whither dread bliss?
    How might you offer me the dead?”

    Zsaeth knew that evil souls were put in Čhuhl’s hold
    The more the merrier, he was told
    “My Lord Čhuhl, what I offer you is war
    My armies and Faer’lan’s, souls galore!”

    “But I ask of you two things; First a sickness,
    thrust upon Faer’lan, the most terrible ever witnessed
    And second; a gateway into their land to pass,
    to avoid the shield, so my armies can mass.”

    Čhuhl replied, “I will leave you with this, a reminder of tonight...”
    And he punctured Zsaeth’s hands as he held the man tight
    Blood streamed from the open wounds, but Zsaeth held his tongue
    “Agony awaits you Pathetic One, if this war is not begun.”

    “I’ll flail your flesh and crush every bone. Oh trust me this is true.
    Break not our deal, or your fate is sealed... and I’ll come back for you.”
    The tunnel appeared and Čhuhl stepped in, then finally he faded away
    Although tears did flow, Zsaeth did know his plan was under way

    Back in Faer’lan, while the Kingdom did sleep
    A shadowy ill spread throughout the land
    And when the sun did rise, ‘twas not a surprise
    Many succumbed to the treachery at hand

    Some died in the night, the very young and the aged
    And the Good King knew they’d been struck with a plague
    He called for his council, though they were all sick as well,
    But they had to act quickly to face down this hell

    But they could find no cure, and time was fleeting
    So the Good King decided to call forth a meeting
    “Tell all my people to come here this day.
    We must pull us together and find us a way.”

    A sick nation was rallied to the castle in haste
    Then the Good King spoke to all, of what they faced
    But no one had answer as the sun set down
    ‘Til a young lady spoke of a well that she found

    “Of what well do you speak? How might it help our plight?”
    the Good King queried at the dawn of the night
    “My family’s unscathed, and we may have the cure,
    by drinking from a well with water magically pure.”

    “It may be the reason we’re healthy, while you’re ill.
    And there’s plenty with so many cups to fill.”
    The Good King nodded and bid it be so
    Asking as many as could travel to hurry and go

    They at last had hope, though time was slipping away
    Some died on the trek, the rest continued to pray
    The young lady led them through mountains and streams
    Then the sun rose and uncovered The Valley of Dreams

    She was at home, living in valley below
    And yelled to all they hadn’t far to go
    The masses of Faer’lan marched on as one
    Down into the vale, their quest nearly done

    Back at the Castle, the Good King was in decline
    Fallen, bedded by plague, he was nearly out of time
    The fate of he and the nation rested in the traveler’s hands
    And he laid quite helpless, not truly in command

    But the plague was not all that the Kingdom faced
    As Zsaeth’s armies rushed through the portal gates
    They came onto the island with evil intent
    To destroy all resistance, and unchallenged they went

    They killed the already dying they found on their way
    As they centered their attention on the Castle this day
    And dark smiles became the face of Lord Zsaeth
    He was conquering his enemy, he was bringing them death

    A few soldiers joined the healers, gathering around the Good King
    And as they waited for the inevitable, they began to sing
    A song of hope, of love and of dreams
    And they sang aloud for all, to drown out the screams

    For now they came, the armies of the foul Lord
    Murdering all that resisted, by arrow and sword
    The Castle was breached as the few sang strong
    And then a sound was heard... it rang loud and long

    Horns blew from the heavens, or so it seemed
    Out the windows the few gazed, their eyes disbelieved
    The Travelers returned, just as the walls came down!
    And the Good Kings armies rallied all around!

    The water was passed quickly around to the ill
    And the magic within healed them quicker still
    A miracle it was to those at Death’s door
    For it gave them the chance to fight the evil horde

    And on this day as the Sun set high,
    as the rays fell down upon the armies outside,
    a battle ensued between good forces and bad
    The sounds of war driving the sanest men mad

    The Good Kings armies fought with valor and scorn
    And drove back the intruders, though outnumbered and worn
    But Zsaeth’s armies were many and would not be beat
    They pushed Faer’lan’s heroes back to the brink of defeat

    Like the sands in the hourglass, time had run out
    There was nowhere to go, it was becoming a rout
    Barely half of the enemy, the Good armies kept trying
    And all seemed lost, all hope was dying

    But alas! Amidst hopelessness, faith was restored
    For the Good King arose and called for his sword
    The sickness was waning, his strength was returning
    He flew to the front lines, as the Castle was burning

    But the fire within him burned hotter still,
    his eyes were ablaze in a rage set to kill
    He tore through Zsaeth’s men with an undeniable goal
    His unyielding fury wrought a terrible toll

    Zsaeth’s legions fled to the portal battered and confused
    They ran for their lives, and Lord Zsaeth was not amused
    He tried desperately to turn them back to fight,
    he yelled at them all, with all his might

    But to no avail, for his call fell on deaf ears
    And he stood there alone to bear witness the cheers
    The Kingdom was saved, thanks to a young lady and Great King
    Who overcame the dark treachery that Lord Zsaeth did bring

    Zsaeth whirled away in disgust, “I’ll return!” he vowed
    But the portal gates shook violently and thunderously loud
    Zsaeth quivered in fear, for out came Čhuhl
    Zsaeth got on his knees, trying to play the fool

    “Yes my Lord, what brings you here and now?” he stuttered
    “Aren’t you pleased with the souls I sent?” he muttered
    With sharpened fangs dripping blood, Čhuhl took in Zsaeth’s measure
    And tore Zsaeth up off the ground to show Zsaeth his displeasure

    Čhuhl shook his head, side to side, saying “Some men never learn.
    When you make a deal with a devil, you always get burned.
    You failed to give me enough souls, my calculations came up one short.”
    And cries of agony were the last sounds heard from the foolish evil Lord

    And I awakened, amazed and mesmerized
    ...by the dream


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    Greg....a wonderfully magical epic poem. Seriously good.....

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