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One of Jim Hunter's problems is that he thinks that the more statistics he cites the more he informs. He doesn't know how to select one figure and embed it in a concisely told point or anecdote. He substitutes lists for narrative. The only time his language gets pushed by anything else is when he has to describe a play.

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